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A Strawberry for Mr. Smith

Mr. Smith got home from work just as the sun was starting to set. He opened the car door and stepped out; watching the red sky that accompanied the day’s dying sun.

“Red...” he said to himself. “ Just like my strawberries.”
Yes. Just like his strawberries. Lovely, sweet, red strawberries. He remembered the last one in the pack. The one that was due for sacrifice tonight, in the ceremony of his ascension from Superior of the Most Holy Order of the Strawberry to Lord of the Most Holy Order of the Strawberry.
Giddy with excitement, he hurried to his door and opened it, stepping inside his beautiful two-sto

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A Dance of Shadows Silver-blue moonlight enters through the balcony, permeating through rich curtains. Shadows dance between horseshoe arches, almost seeming to laugh at the man inside the chamber. And the shadow-man among them watches. The man inside the chamber drinks from a golden cup. The night is cool, and a light breeze makes the light curtains flutter, spectres of wind and moonshine. The man empties the cup and turns around. He observes the peculiar movement of the shadows, as they kick, shrink, jump, fly and fade. Fade and strengthen, and fade again. He shakes his head. A Dance of Shadows
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A Strawberry for Mr. SmithMr. Smith got home from work just as the sun was starting to set. He opened the car door and stepped out; watching the red sky that accompanied the day’s dying sun.

“Red...” he said to himself. “ Just like my strawberries.”
Yes. Just like his strawberries. Lovely, sweet, red strawberries. He remembered the last one in the pack. The one that was due for sacrifice tonight, in the ceremony of his ascension from Superior of the Most Holy Order of the Strawberry to Lord of the Most Holy Order of the Strawberry.
Giddy with excitement, he hurried to his door and opened it, stepping inside his beautiful two-sto A Strawberry for Mr. Smith
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Fiery Skies“Scramble, scramble!” A voice boomed over the communicator.” Scramble to all available aircraft, a flight of enemy bombers and escorts are approaching the base.”
“Holy crap!” Lieutenant Axeric screamed out as he fell off his bed, startled by the desperate voice repeating orders over the communicators. He rose quickly, looking at the other pilots, already suiting up.

“Shit! Not another bombing. Don’t they get tired of this?!” he muttered to himself, picking up his black flight suit. He put on the suit and boots, grabbed his helmet, and followed the rest of the pilots. They ran to the hangar, a desperate ra Fiery Skies
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The ChaseI stop...Pant. I look at the stone floor beneath my feet. I break out into a run again. He can’t catch me, I can’t let him. I look forward: nothing but empty darkness. Yet the darkness was much more welcome than him. I tried to convince myself that I was too fast: that as long as I ran, he’d never catch me. That he’d never see anything but my back as I ran ahead, my feet hitting the cold stone ground.
But another part of me said that I couldn’t do it: no matter how much I could run, he would always catch up. That he was, faster, stronger. I just kept running. If I got lucky, the first part would be right and I’d find a way out. W The Chase
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Sun Aug 27, 2006, 4:46 AM

Wow... I've been really out of this for way too long. Haven't been writing much. College hasn't left me a whole lot of free time. I'll be taking a Science Fiction writing class this semester so that might put me back on the Sci-fi horse. So much has gone on since I last wrote on this that I haven't got the slightest idea where to begin. So I think I'll leave that for another time. Good to be back again. I hadn't even seen the site's redesign.

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Current Residence: My cave
Interests: Writing, computers and gaming.I have other interests,of course, but I don't feel like writing them.
Favourite band or musician: Demonoid, Black Sabbath, Dave Matthews, Coheed and Cambria
Favourite genre of music: Mostly metal. Of most kinds. Rock as well.
Favourite artist: netghost and deligaris
Favourite poet or writer: Neil Gaiman, Terry Pratchett,Frank Herbert, J.R.R. Tolkien, Ray Bradbury
Operating System: Windows XP
MP3 player of choice: Windows Media Player
Shell of choice: Nautilus shells! They're so spirally and golden-ratioed.
Wallpaper of choice: Changes often
Skin of choice: My own. I don't have a choice on that.
Favourite game: Not sure. I like lots of games.
Favourite gaming platform: PC, Xbox and GameCube
Tools of the Trade: MS Word, Notepad, paper and pencil

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~kenneththeman May 29, 2006, 1:37:11 AM

This reminds me of a Rush song I used to listen to in high school, not sure why. It's a wonderful cornucopia of splendid serendipity. There is an old saying in my country. It goes, "Don't eat the cow before you milk it". That's what your artwork makes me think of.

*Betelgeux Jul 20, 2005, 8:24:39 PM

thank you for visiting, sir eldritch.

~Kingox Mar 28, 2005, 6:01:58 PM

Hello there! You are a random deviant. Your art looks ok. nice work

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^snowmask Aug 22, 2004, 6:08:43 AM

Life is treating my very kindly.

I'm taking a gap year, so it's pretty much 365 days of free time, for me to do pretty much anything I want. I'm working now, just to get some extra cash, but then I'm also dancing and that's cool, coz I'm trying to get into the Academy of Performing Arts. I'm travelling too, and plan to visit the US at the end of the year

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=Sinn-ryu Aug 11, 2004, 2:17:09 PM

Thank you for the watch! ^_^

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=Sinn-ryu Aug 9, 2004, 6:46:59 PM

Thank you for your helpful comment on the first chapter of The Crystal Flute. I definitely appreciate it ^_^

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